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Guidelines for Nonsexist Use of Language
These Guidelines were published by the National Council of Teachers of English, and were last revised 1985. Keene State College English Department uses them as their guidelines for nonsexist use of language in English 101 and throughout the curriculum. The following is an excerpt from the NCTE's Guidelines for Nonsexist Use of Language. For more information contact the NCTE.
[These guidelines deal] primarily with word choice. Many of the examples are matters of vocabulary; a few are matters of grammatical choice. The vocabulary items are relatively easy to deal with, since the English lexicon has a history of rapid change. Grammar is a more difficult area, and we have chosen to use alternatives that already exist in the language rather than to invent new constructions. In both cases, recommended alternatives have been determined by what is graceful and unobtrusive. The purpose of these changes is to suggest alternative styles.
Generic Man
Since the word man has come to refer almost exclusively to adult males, it is sometimes difficult to recognize its generic meaning.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| mankind |
humanity, human beings, people |
| man's achievements |
human achievements |
| the best man for the job |
the best person for the job |
| the common man |
the average person, ordinary people |
| cavemen |
cave dwellers, prehistoric people |
Sometimes the combining form -woman is used alongside -man in occupational terms and job titles, but we prefer using the same titles for men and women when naming jobs that could be held by both. Note, too, that using the same forms for men and women is a way to avoid using the combining form -person as a substitute for -woman only.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| chairman/chairwoman |
coordinator (of a committee or department), moderator (of a meeting), presiding officer, head, chairperson |
| businessman/businesswoman |
business executive |
| congressman/congresswoman |
congressional representative |
| policeman/policewoman |
police officer |
| salesman/saleswoman |
sales clerk, sales representative, salesperson |
| fireman |
fire fighter |
| mailman |
letter carrier |
Generic He and His
Because there is no one pronoun in English that can be effectively substituted for he or his, we offer several alternatives. The form he or she has been the NCTE house style over the last ten years, on the premise that it is less distracting than she or he or he/she. There are other choices, however. The one you make will depend on what you are writing.
Sometimes it is possible to drop the possessive form his altogether or to substitute an article.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| The average student is worried about his grades. |
The average student is worried about grades. |
| When the student hands in his paper, read it immediately |
When the student hands in the paper, read it immediately |
Often it makes sense to use the plural instead of the singular.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| Give the student his grade right away. |
Give the students their grades right away. |
| Ask the student to hand in his work as soon as he is finished. |
Ask students to hand in their work as soon as they are finished. |
The first or second person can sometimes be substituted for the third person.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| As a teacher, he is faced daily with the problem of paperwork. |
As teachers, we are faced daily with the problem of paperwork. |
| When a teacher asks his students for an evaluation, he is putting himself on the spot. |
When you ask your students for an evaluation, you are putting yourself on the spot. |
In some situations, the pronoun one (one's) can be substituted for he (his), but it should be used sparingly. Notice that the use of one - like the use of we or you - changes the tone of what you are writing.
| Problem |
Alternative |
| He might well wonder what his response should be. |
One might well wonder what one's response should be. |
A sentence with he or his can sometimes be recast in the passive voice or another impersonal construction.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| Each student should hand in his paper promptly. |
Papers should be handed in promptly. |
| He found such an idea intolerable. |
Such an idea was intolerable. |
When the subject is an indefinite pronoun, the plural form their can occasionally be used with it, especially when the referent for the pronoun is clearly understood to be plural.
| Problem |
Alternative |
| When everyone contributes his own ideas, the discussion will be a success. |
When everyone contributes their own ideas, the discussion will be a success. |
But since this usage is transitional, it is usually better to recast the sentence and avoid the indefinite pronoun.
| Problem |
Alternative |
| When everyone contributes his own ideas, the discussion will be a success. |
When all the students contribute their own ideas, the discussion will be a success. |
Finally, sparing use can be made of he or she and his or her. It is best to restrict this choice to contexts in which the pronouns are not repeated.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| Each student will do better if he has a voice in the decision. |
Each student will do better if he or she has a voice in the decision. |
| Each student can select his own topic. |
Each student can select his or her own topic. |
Sex-Role Stereotyping
Word choices sometimes reflect unfortunate and unconscious assumptions about sex roles - for example, that farmers are always men and elementary school teachers are always women; that men are valued for their accomplishments and women for their physical attributes; or that men are strong and brave while women are weak and timid. We need to examine the assumptions inherent in certain stock phrases and choose nonstereotyped alternatives.
Identify men and women in the same way. Diminutive or special forms to name women are usually unnecessary. In most cases, generic terms such as doctor or actor should be assumed to include both men and women. Only occasionally are alternate forms needed, and in these cases, the alternate form replaces both the masculine and the feminine titles.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| stewardess |
flight attendant (for both steward and stewardess) |
| authoress |
author |
| waitress |
server, food server |
| poetess |
poet |
| coed |
student |
| lady lawyer |
lawyer...she |
| male nurse |
nurse...he |
Do not represent women as occupying only certain jobs or roles and men as occupying only certain others.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| the kindergarten teacher...she |
occasionally use the kindergarten teacher...he
or kindergarten teachers...they |
| the principal...he |
occasionally use the principal...she or principals...they |
| Have your mother send a snack for the party. |
Have a parent send a snack for the party. occasionally use Have your father... or Have your parents... |
| NCTE conventiongoers and their wives are invited. |
NCTE conventiongoers and their spouses are invited. |
| Writers become so involved in their work that they neglect their wives and children. |
Writers become so involved in their work that they neglect their families. |
Treat men and women in a parallel manner.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| The class interviewed Chief Justice Burger and Mrs. O'Connor. |
The class interviewed Warren Burger and Sandra O'Connor or... Mr. Burger and Ms. O'Connor or... Chief Justice Burger and Justice O'Connor. |
| The reading list included Proust, Joyce, Gide, and Virginia Woolf. |
The reading list included Proust, Joyce, Gide, and Woolf. or...Marcel Proust, James Joyce, André Gide, and Virginia Woolf. |
| Both Bill Smith, a straight-A sophomore, and Kathy Ryan, a pert junior, won writing awards. |
Both sophomore Bill Smith, a straight-A student, and junior Kathy Ryan, editor of the school paper, won writing awards. |
Seek alternatives to language that patronizes or trivializes women, as well as to language that reinforces stereotyped images of both women and men.
| Problems |
Alternatives |
| The president of the company hired a gal Friday. |
The president of the company hired an assistant. |
| I'll have my girl do it. |
I'll ask my secretary to do it. |
| Stella is a career woman. |
Stella is a professional or Stella is a doctor (architect, etc.). |
| The ladies on the committee all supported the bill. |
The women on the committee all supported the bill. |
| Pam had lunch with the girls from the office. |
Pam had lunch with the women from the office. |
| This is a man-sized job. |
This is a big (huge, enormous) job. |
| That's just an old wives' tale. |
That's just a superstition (superstitious story). |
| Don't be such an old lady. |
Don't be so fussy. |
Sexist Language in a Direct Quotation
Quotations cannot be altered, but there are other ways of dealing with this problem. Avoid the quotation altogether if it is not really necessary. Paraphrase the quotation, giving the original author credit for the idea.
If the quotation is fairly short, recast it as an indirect quotation, substituting nonsexist words as necessary.
| Problem |
Alternative |
| Among the questions asked by the school representatives was the following: "Considering the ideal college graduate, what degree of knowledge would you prefer him to have in each of the curricular areas?" |
Among the questions asked by the school representatives was one about what degree of knowledge the ideal college graduate should have in each of the curricular areas. |
Sample Revised Passage
Substantial revisions or deletions are sometimes necessary when problems overlap or when stereotyped assumptions about men and women so pervade a passage that simple replacement of words is inadequate.
| Problem |
Alternative |
| Each student who entered the classroom to find himself at the mercy of an elitist, Vassar-trained Miss Fidditch could tell right away that the semester would be a trial. The trend in composition pedagogy toward student-centered essays and away from hours of drill on grammatical correctness has meant, at least for him, that he can finally learn to write. But Macrorie, Elbow, and Janet Emig could drive the exasperated teacher of a cute and perky cheerleader type to embrace the impersonal truth of whom as direct object rather than fight his way against the undertow of a gush of personal experience. As Somerset Maugham remarked, "Good prose should resemble the conversation of a well-bred man."
and both Miss Fidditch and the bearded guru who wants to "get inside your head" must realize it. |
The trend in composition pedagogy toward student-centered essays, represented by such writers as Ken Macrorie, Peter Elbow, and Janet Emig, has meant that some students are finally learning to write. Yet the movement away from hours of drill on grammatical correctness has brought with it a new problem: in the hands of the inexperienced teacher, student essays can remain little more than unedited piles of personal experiences and emotions.
For more information contact NCTE. |
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